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Kelly Trost's avatar

Hello Paperfly, this is beautiful!

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This is so lovely just as it is, a flow of words and images, evocative, emotional. It feels like a felt truth. It's enchanting. But it also carries metaphors open to interpretation. Seeds as sacrifice. Aspirations just out of reach. Navigating landscapes of ambition as hazards lurk all around.

I love the sense of strength hidden beneath all the uncertainty. There is treachery about, yes. Tension even in a walk, a walk that must be endured, vigilence provoked at every turn, like each workplace along a career path.

Little red riding hood on her way to grandma's house (old age?) as innocence is tested, threatened. I feel a melancholy infused with a gentle heroism. I think that's why I say it's a lovely poem.

Thank you for sharing it. Well done!

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