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Parrish Baker's avatar

Powerful last line.

B. Daniel Hagen's avatar

Agreed! I admit I had to read it a second time for it to click, but it instantly took me back to when my son’s teeth started coming in. 😊

And I love the presentation as well!

Dave Mead's avatar

Wonderful poem, thank you for sharing.

Eugenia P. Frankenberg πŸ₯€'s avatar

beautiful ❀️ you capture the allure of mountains so well

Solo Deo Gloria's avatar

I have chillsβ€”thank you for this