I like haikus, especially from Issa. I certainly like yours, although the language is sometimes a bit beyond me (my English generally isn't bad, but I had to look up some meanings) and they are more social and cultural in their 'imagery' rather than sudden flashes of insight brought on by nature. I like them all the same, and will keep reading them. Thank you for this gift to the community.
Thank you for this feedback! Itβs really cool to read your perspective, because I find it really interesting how things translate between languages - especially things that are idiomatic or implicit. Your English is excellent by the way.
Thank you Jennifer, I enjoyed reading those. The Process π
Iβm so glad! Thank you for your comment βΊοΈ
I enjoyed your haiku. I especially liked The Chronicler. I wish I could quote it but the formatting doesn't allow for it.
Thank you! π€ I found my original post of βthe Chroniclerβ for you, if that helps! https://substack.com/@paperfly/note/c-110089951?r=5do552&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action
these are all so gorgeous! My favorites are kindling and instinct. The latter gave me goosebumps!
Thank you so much! βΊοΈ π
I like haikus, especially from Issa. I certainly like yours, although the language is sometimes a bit beyond me (my English generally isn't bad, but I had to look up some meanings) and they are more social and cultural in their 'imagery' rather than sudden flashes of insight brought on by nature. I like them all the same, and will keep reading them. Thank you for this gift to the community.
Thank you for this feedback! Itβs really cool to read your perspective, because I find it really interesting how things translate between languages - especially things that are idiomatic or implicit. Your English is excellent by the way.