I love this, especially the refusal to explain anything, to just paint images like a collage, almost without a subject. It felt immersive like East Asian poetry, and there's such a gentle kind of vibrance to this piece. Thank you!
This doesnβt feel rememberedβit feels relived. That βmolasses-sweetβ safety, the βragged-lung burn,β the reckless energy of a day that feels like it might never end. Not nostalgiaβsomething wilder, freer.
How evocative, a tonic in a world of existential angst x
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Another wonderful poem, thanks for sharing. π
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Feel like I'm a kid in the country again, miss it a bit. Not the nettles.
This is lovely: image-laden, word-dextrous, focus-shifting, deeply simple.
Thank you so much for your kind (and beautifully written) comment β₯οΈ
I love this, especially the refusal to explain anything, to just paint images like a collage, almost without a subject. It felt immersive like East Asian poetry, and there's such a gentle kind of vibrance to this piece. Thank you!
Thank you so much for your kind words!
This doesnβt feel rememberedβit feels relived. That βmolasses-sweetβ safety, the βragged-lung burn,β the reckless energy of a day that feels like it might never end. Not nostalgiaβsomething wilder, freer.
Beautiful work.
Thank you for this lovely comment! I think youβre an incredible writer so this feedback really means a lot to me :)
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Well, I think youβre pretty extraordinary yourself. Keep it upβand thank you for the kind words β₯οΈ
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Beautiful poem. It's captures moments in nature well.
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Gorgeous descriptions
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This is soulful and amazing.
Thank you so much β₯οΈ
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